User talk:Dtetta/GlobalWarming-Land-use-change
@Femkemilene: - thanks for those thoughtful comments and kind words. I was going to wait a couple of days to see if @Hedgehoque:, @Chidgk1: or any other editors had any additional comments to make, and then respond. I was also going to do an underline / strikeout of the text in each section to address comments. I’ll put a ✅ next to comments I think I have addressed. Both you and Hedgehoque have expressed ongoing concern with the length of the text in the technologies section, so that’s probably the first thing I will work on. As I asked Hedgehoque, I would ask you to let me know your thoughts on whether the technologies section should cover at least the following: 1)briefly mention the principal technologies available; describe their potential to move us away from fossil fuel usage, otherwise lower GHG emissions, or lowering GHG concentrations; describe their downsides and potential barriers to their usage (and means to mitigate them); and give each option relatively equal treatment. ✓
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