User talk:Drlauraguertin/Deborah Kelley

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Hi Drlauraguertin!

• For biographies, the person's DOB/YOB goes in the first sentence of the lead (Deborah Sue Kelley (born 1958) is...)
• We avoid euphemisms. Instead of saying her father "passed away" you would just say "died"

This looks really good otherwise! That's all I have to add :) Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:44, 1 June 2020 (UTC)