User talk:Dragonstormborn/sandbox

Looking good! See my email, though, to create a special draft space for this new article... Thanks, Eric WritingMan (talk) 16:39, 26 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

[Taeyoung]

3. Note at least three things that you like and are done well.

- Trying to explain easily

- Dividing paragraphs properly

- Natural flow

4. Note at least two things regarding the content (not grammar) that you think could be improved. These could include: explanations are unclear, context that is unexplained and thus unclear, terms that are not explained well enough, explanations that are incomplete, places where the citations are unclear or missing, terms/names that you think probably have their own Wikipedia pages and should thus be linked.

- It needs to be improved citation.

- Structure may be able to be re-organized such as definition, history, progress etc.

- Roles of two other stakeholders are not explained. — Preceding unsigned comment added by TaeyoungYoon (talk • contribs) 19:28, 2 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]