User talk:Dontcallmedaddy/sandbox

Hi Manuel,
Looking good! Couple of suggestions:

• So close on the word count! (973) I'm going to give it to you this time, but please add 27 more words before the final draft, or you'll get points off for that.
• I suggest placing the internal links within your paragraphs, not in the headers -- that seems to be a more common way of doing it across Wikipedia.
• Your sources look good, but I'd like you to include more info in your citations. List the companies as the author. Don't put the titles in ALL CAPS. Try to put a year if you can. Basically include as many parts to the citations as you can -- aim for all the bits you would include in an APA citation. Also for some reason the sources show up twice, so try to fix that before the final draft.
  

Kairyth (talk) 23:58, 5 April 2016 (UTC)