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Your submission at Articles for creation: Joint Trauma System, the DoD Center of Excellence for Trauma (September 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Czarkoff was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Note, the subject is most likely notable, but notability is not demonstrated by references. Also note, the two sections that have to be removed in order to bring this article to encyclopedic standards – Examples of Outcomes Generated from DoDTR Analyses and Awards – contain most references.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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— Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk•track) 19:23, 13 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

This article does provide independent, secondary sources (and authors) and references. Please clarify why you think the Examples of Outcomes Generated from DoDTR Analyses is not up to encyclopedic standards. This information is not promotional. The intent of the section is to show examples of the work the organization does and how it impacts clinical care. Also, why do you take issue with the number of references in this section? I understand why the Awards section is questionable, but I see other organizations listing their achievements, so why can't we? This article is not to generate business. We do not work that way. The organization is a government organization which serves both domestic and international trauma care providers. Our service and analysis is free. This article is to let people know about the analyses and clinical care innovations, so they take advantage of the findings and innovations. --DoDTRmanager (talk) 18:47, 21 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Joint Trauma System (November 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Shadowowl was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Phrases like expert on military trauma care and Captures never before attainable prehospital trauma care are promotional and not allowed on Wikpedia

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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» Shadowowl | talk 13:06, 20 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! DoDTRmanager, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! » Shadowowl | talk 13:06, 20 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Joint Trauma System

Hello, DoDTRmanager. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Joint Trauma System".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Legacypac (talk) 23:17, 15 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]