User talk:DevilsHolePupfishFanatic/Lissachatina fulica

Hi Fenoccio,

I really like the improvements you made to your article. Your edits are really clear, concise and well-structured. You have a clear organization of headings and subheadings, accurate descriptions about the topics, variety of information, as well as really cute image!

But I think you can do better after fixing some minor errors and I have some very little suggestions for you:

Firstly, Some of your statements are not associated with supporting references, for example: "During the mating, the snails either simultaneously transfer gametes to each other (bilateral sperm transfer), or one snail transfers sperm into the other (unilateral sperm transfer)" and "Transferred sperm can be stored within the body up to two years", I think you need to add citations after the sentences.

Secondly, make sure that all your format is consistent. For example, "Schistosoma mansoni is a parasitic flatworm that causes intestinal schistosomiasis. Sporocysts of S. mansoni have been detected in snail faeces" I've noticed all the other sentences in the section have a period at the end, I think you also need to have a pediod after this sentence!

Thirdly, I think most of your information is reliable. But I've noticed that there is an error in reference 11, probably something is wrong with the title. Fix it and you'll be fine!

Finally, post more images if you want! I find the snail really cute and I'd really like to see more pictures of it! Great job and good luck :) Xinyu Cai111111 (talk) 06:05, 7 December 2021 (UTC)