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Your submission at Articles for creation: Christopher Clinton Conway (February 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 21:10, 27 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Dev scribe, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Onel5969 ^{TT me} 21:10, 27 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Doheny Eye Institute (March 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment they left was:

"top-ranked " "excellent" - "precious and delicate" These might work for a magazine article, but this is an encyclopedia and articles are (perhaps dry) statements of fact.

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LaMona (talk) 18:25, 1 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Doheny Eye Institute (April 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment they left was:

Still needs any additional amount of in-depth third-party news sources overall.

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SwisterTwister talk 06:03, 2 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Doheny Eye Institute (July 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Primefac was:

This draft is a hodgepodge of content that has little to do with the Institute, or is trivial/non-notable content. In particular:

Breakthroughs - unless a "breakthrough" has been noticed by independent reliable sources it is just a good bit of research. If a scientist discovers a tree in the forest and no one is around to see it...?
Awards - as I mentioned on IRC, the awards should be ones given to the Institute, not its researchers.

I'm on the fence about the "Support orgs" section, and potentially when the other stuff is trimmed/removed it will not appear as promotional as it reads to me right now.

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Primefac (talk) 18:34, 8 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Doheny Eye Institute

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Doheny Eye Institute, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Doheny Eye Institute (July 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

The same problems persist. This is a promotional article about the institute. It includes repeated information about the conditions it treats, all of them perfectly standard for any such center.

It lists too many key people, it had multiple adjectives of praise.

Do not submit again in this manner

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DGG ( talk ) 00:14, 24 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I also call your attention to our rules about Conflit of Interest WP:COI and our Terms of Use, particularly with respect to paid contributions without disclosure . DGG ( talk ) 00:15, 24 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Replaceable fair use File:Christopher Clinton Conway, May 2014.png

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Proposed deletion of Christopher Clinton Conway

The article Christopher Clinton Conway has been proposed for deletion because of the following concern:

Fails WP:GNG.

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