User talk:Delparastan/sandbox
Ahlam's Peer Review
[edit]A lead section that is easy to understand:
- The lead would be derivative of the first sentence under Biosequestration with Iron Fertilization and I think more can be said about it in the previous section.
A clear structure:
- The draft posted suggests an easy to follow wiki page that is relevant and not written about, but could benefit if the first sentence under Biosequestration with Iron Fertilization was developed into the lead for the article.
Balanced coverage:
- I think the content is divided well and covered adequately. I think more could be written on the topic.
Neutral content:
- Content is nuetral. All of the information is factual but I think the first sentence in the third paragraph is somewhat of an opinion. You say it's important but it could have other words describe it that hold less of an opinion like "has a role" or "is a part of ___ because ___".
Reliable sources:
- In the technical section, there are quite a few reliable sources. I checked a few links and they worked.