User talk:DefenderV/sandbox

Sources

Your sources look good. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:10, 26 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I saw that you added the sources. There are still some problems. Some of your sources are improperly cited. "Shibboleth Authentication Request" is not a source title. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:26, 3 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The Lead

I don't see your draft. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:23, 1 November 2015 (UTC) I wrote a lead for Assassination attempts on Fidel Castro and posted it on the article without putting it in my sandbox by accident. I did this before Fall Break. — Preceding unsigned comment added by DefenderV (talk • contribs) 17:39, 2 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

A few changes would be a good idea. The first sentence should read "States" in the plural, with no comma after. End the last sentence with "failed." Josef Horáček (talk) 21:02, 8 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]