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Your submission at Articles for creation: Lake Butler Bus Crash (July 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by SafariScribe were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of events). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Lake Butler Bus Crash and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 17:09, 11 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Danny8384535! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 17:09, 11 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lake Butler Bus Crash (July 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by SafariScribe were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of events). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Lake Butler Bus Crash and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 17:09, 11 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

A belated welcome!

Here's wishing you a belated welcome to Wikipedia, Danny8384535! I see that you've already been around a while and wanted to thank you for your contributions. Though you seem to have been successful in finding your way around, you may still benefit from following some of the links below, which help editors get the most out of Wikipedia:

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I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Again, welcome! Un assiolo (talk) 19:52, 11 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lake Butler Bus Crash (August 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DoubleGrazing was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of events). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Sorry to say, but this draft has serious issues.

Firstly, I don't see notability, which would require lasting impact or historical significance. The news reporting is from the time of the event and/or very local. Even the description in the lead, "one of the most tragic car crashes in Gainesville", suggests that while no doubt noteworthy locally, this wouldn't have breached the news threshold more widely.

Secondly, there is absolutely no need to list, or provide photos of, any of the people involved, as they are clearly low-profile individuals, and doing so violates their right to privacy. Note also that Wikipedia is not a memorial.

BTW: Findagrave is not a reliable source.

BTW2: I'm curious how all the photos were uploaded as 'own work' by the draft author? I'm guessing they aren't, in which case releasing them to the public domain like this almost certainly violates someone's copyright.

Finally, I'm unhappy about the statement that the truck driver "wasn't getting enough sleep", suggesting that he was wilfully negligent etc. If that statement was supported by reliable source(s), it would be one thing, but the only source cited in that section doesn't even mention tiredness or lack of sleep.

For all these reasons, I will be requesting that the draft be deleted. I think G10 fits best, but isn't perfect; it is obviously up to the attending admin's discretion whether they are prepared to accept that or not. (If not, then I will come back to this to delete the content which I don't think should appear here.)

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Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Lake Butler Bus Crash and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:38, 3 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

August 2024

A page you created has been nominated for deletion as an attack page, according to section G10 of the criteria for speedy deletion.

Do not create pages that attack, threaten, or disparage their subject or any other entity. Attack pages and files are not tolerated by Wikipedia, and users who create or add such material may be blocked from editing. DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:38, 3 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]