User talk:DaniSchuh/sandbox
Thank you for sharing your editing work. I enjoyed reading the story of Margaret Cross Norton to learn the history and real world of archives. The vivid and detailed examples have more power to describe the value of archives. There are some trivial things listed for your reference. 1. Typo errors. "their practice to accept any records that were offered to their repository. ." duplicate period "In 1934, the Illinois State Arsenal Building was destroyed in fire a fire." duplicate words "Archivist from 1937 to 194242 and 1946 respectively." duplicate numbers 2. Due to incomplete contexts were extracted from the original, there are confusions such as "Stiles presented a new organization of record keeping" it lacks the context for who is Stiles. After going back to Wiki original, I understand the whole story. 3. The topic of State Archivist and Professional Impact could be subdivided to three or four parts according to contents. 1) the trip of practical research 2) the discovery of archival value in legal and administrative issues. 3)the landmark building of archives 4) the advocate of the utilitarian value of archives 5)the pioneer woman in professional field Subdivision would shorten the professional impact as an individual content, but it might bring more contents adding to subtopics.
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