User talk:DangHogi/sandbox

Draft feedback

Good plan.

Well written, though some sentences are maybe a bit short and choppy (make 'em flow!).

Need a secondary source!

Vellichor (talk) 19:30, 4 November 2015 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hey, I'm probably going to start on this tomorrow, if you have any last minute changes, let me know!

Nwerry (talk) 21:02, 10 November 2015 (UTC)