User talk:DCHWave/sandbox

Hello, I understand that you may not be done editing your sandbox and page but some of the gaps I see are citations to your sources and unfinished sentences. You could make some points a little bit more clear by adding explanations, such as the parallel you began making with the problems people face when coming out with their sexual orientation versus their identity. Otherwise, I really like how you are adding this topic, one that is not very talked about, to the page in order to bring more awareness to it. Preyessanchez (talk) 04:32, 11 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, there's a lot of information already on the page. What do you see yourself hopefully adding/improving? It looks like you didn’t quite update your sandbox fully, but I like what you put so far. I would suggest putting more sources backing up your claims. Jessica Forbes — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jfvrbes (talk • contribs) 01:11, 12 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Final wiki contribution comments: Overall great content added, though it was pretty short. I would have liked a little more explanation to some of the points you made to help clarify what you meant (which I did a bit of directly in the live wiki). Nlegate (talk) 21:20, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]