User talk:Cmustudent117/sandbox

Mrinalini's Peer Review

Hi!

I just reviewed your wikipedia article Yale attitude change approach and I think you've done a great job so far. I really liked your introduction, I thought it was detailed, thorough, and informative.

For your section on Theoretical approaches, I liked the information you included. I think I was a little confused with the title of the section since it seemed as if you would talk about multiple approaches. I think clearer subsections would help organize the different aspects you were talking about so that it's easier for the reader. Once you have those subsections, I think including more information for each subsection will help balance other information about theoretical approaches you want to include - in addition to the Yale attitude change approach.

I liked the Empirical findings section, I thought the sources and information you included were strong and a good application of the concepts. I thought the Controversy section was an interesting addition and flowed well with the rest of the article content.

Overall if you added a little more information on the different theoretical approaches and organized it by approach that would help with the balance of information and progression of your article. I think if you added more empirical findings that would be interesting as well so there is also a balance of information between sections. Great job! Mrinalis (talk) 15:07, 27 November 2017 (UTC)