User talk:Clucomm/sandbox
You did a lot of strong work. The third sentence doesn't add anything, and just makes it less comprehensible to the average reader. Otherwise, great job. Drdemartino (talk) 18:57, 3 November 2014 (UTC)
You did a lot of strong work. The third sentence doesn't add anything, and just makes it less comprehensible to the average reader. Otherwise, great job. Drdemartino (talk) 18:57, 3 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]