User talk:Cheerio2/Vertical integration

peer review follow-up

This draft is looking very good and @Ellaladd and @Dwang74 offer useful feedback with which to focus your efforts moving forward. I think their advice is helpful and should take you to the stage where you move your work to the article live space. Exciting! Keep up the good work. KGS8TH (talk) 17:08, 27 March 2023 (UTC)