User talk:Chazhardy/sandbox

The article that has stood for 9 years has been edited thoroughly and material added, I have tried to respond to all the criticism of my former draft regarding notability, format, citations, etc.≈≈≈≈

LAO

"Lao continued on until 1988". Does that mean she died in 1988? Not obvious. By the way, if I remember correctly I saw her while on a public tour of Swananoa around 1980. Festinating people and place. Ward20 (talk) 09:12, 25 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I have repaired that sentence., Thanks for the heads up. Chazhardy≈≈≈≈ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chazhardy (talk • contribs) 02:46, 28 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]