User talk:Chantelleh/Musée d'Orsay

As you continue, organize your sandbox with titles of where each paragraph will go so that the viewer has a better understanding of what they are reading.

Paragraph 1 sounds good but make sure to add citations.

I see that you will be adding another section of how the museum is today, I think this is a good idea but because "today" will not always be today and it will at some point be in the past, maybe integrate the information you find into an already existing paragraph that talks about the museum at different points in time.

Organize the information that has been collected about the Gare d'Orsay either into titles or how it will look in the article. I linked "Gare d'Orsay" to its wikipedia page, you can do this for other things if you feel it would benefit your writing!

Overall great work! SophiaGeyer (talk) 15:37, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The overall content seems great. I would like to know more about the interior and how it came to be. Once you find more sources the content will be thicker! I agree with the addition of subsections to break up the history. It might be useful to relate to other museums?? --Joannluksza (talk) 05:14, 25 February 2021 (UTC)joannluksza (talk) 22:14, 24 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]