User talk:Cfscwg/Sandbox

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Pronunciation helps need to follow Wikipedia:IPA for English (e.g., Nephi)
See Template:Infobox Company for what goes inside the infobox for each field
The lead (or introductory paragraph) should summarize the body of the article. No citations are needed except for controversial facts. The information should be presented again with a citation in the body. Review WP:LEAD.
Image use on wikipedia can get complicated, but basically you can't upload an image (especially non-free images, like logos) unless it can be associated with a bona fide article; so, wait until you're ready to create the article again before uploading non-free images.
Include a Competitors section and any other applicable sections (controversies, etc.) that would help ensure a neutral point of view for the article
Biggest concern: citations. All citations are currently from Rideau, which will not fly. Only notable organizations get articles on Wikipedia. I think Rideau could qualify, but you have to establish that by using third-party, reliable sources--some from Rideau are okay, but not all. You will also need to format the citations properly. See the refs in American Leak Detection, a short business article I helped another editor salvage from deletion. The entire History section is supported by one citation, which is just a link to the Rideau home page--you have to link directly to the source. You may also review WP:SPAMMER.