User talk:Cfbird1008/Miniature Self-Portrait (Anguissola, Boston

Peer Review 10/18/24

Dear Casey,

I'm happy that I was assigned to review your article! I remember that you shared that you have done a wikipedia project before, so your work has definitely helped me to understand the nature of the assignment better. I especially liked your use of subheadings, it helped to further organize information in a way that aided my understanding of the topic. I appreciate the directions that you're taking in your research and it has definitely inspired me about new topics to look into when it comes to my project. As far as the peer review questions, everything in the article is directly relevant to the work in discussion. The point of view is neutral and the claims you have introduced are supported with valid evidence. I don't see any points of view over- or under-represented. The references that I checked all were valid and linked to the right places. My only idea for improvement at this stage is in the Anguissola's skill in Miniature Painting section, the phrase "known for certain" comes up twice and could possibly be changed to improve the flow of reading.

I'm excited to view your finished product!

Patrick Carlock PatrickCarlock (talk) 20:46, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, Patrick! I just left you a review, your article looks done to me -- it is very well done! I'm excited to finish this up and I'd love for you to revisit it after I've worked on it a little more. Have a great weekend. Cfbird1008 (talk) 23:24, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]