User talk:CellBlue/Splenocyte
Peer Review
[edit]Overall- This article is very concise, stays on topic and does not contain any extraneous information. Editor greatly improved the article by adding citations and information to the article body. It is definitely a much better article after these edits!
Lead - Adding a citation to the first lead sentence would add credibility.
Article Body - Providing hyperlinks to other articles more frequently (example: link to Wikipedia pages on ALL types of immune cells discussed, red pulp and white pulp, phagocytose, etc) would make it more helpful. Since the article does not define or explain any of these things, it is hard to understand from the perspective of a reader not educated in anatomy and physiology. This can be solved by either embedding links or providing a brief explanation of these terms.
The last sentence infers that T cells make antibodies which is incorrect.
Some comments on grammar- overuse of the word "like". This sentence - The spleen is split into red and white pulp regions, the red pulp is involved with filtering blood and recycling iron, and the white pulp is involved in the immune response. - is too long.
References- one reference is a website, the other is over 10 years old. This was not my topic so I do not know how much recent information/research exists but more recent references would be better if they exist and are relevant. ArminiusPanda (talk) 20:20, 3 April 2024 (UTC)