User talk:Cavaliergirl96/NMAC 3108 Journal

Drafting new material for your article

Hi Sara. I read over the part about the tornado. I think what you have is fine but maybe you can also add how the 75-16 interchange affected the cemetery as well. I know that area is currently under construction but I don't know what impact it will have on the cemetery when it is finished. I will also say that tornado devastated many of the neighborhoods in that area. I don't know if anyone was buried at Rose Hill because of that particular tornado but it is a possibility. Jkoplin1 (talk) 15:49, 1 July 2019 (UTC)Jkoplin1

@Jkoplin1: Hey Jessica! I am so sorry for not responding to you sooner. I'm just now seeing your post. Those are great suggestions! I hadn't considered mentioning how the 75-16 interchange affected the landscape, but I found a resource this week that mentioned the same idea. I'll definitely be using that! I'll do some more research on those killed in the tornado; that would be really cool to include. Thanks again! --Sara Kathryn 22:59, 12 July 2019 (UTC)

Final Journal Post?

When might I expect this posted? Thanks. —Grlucas (talk) 11:40, 22 July 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, getting ahead of myself. You have another two days... —Grlucas (talk) 12:31, 22 July 2019 (UTC)