User talk:CarrNayeli
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[edit]Hello, CarrNayeli, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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Neal's Edits
[edit]the work you've done is very good. I would suggest adding a citation for the Likert test just for clarity. in addition to that, I think it would create a more complete dialogue on the topic if you used a few more sources in each of your sections. A simple grammatical correction would be that you don't need to cite the same source four times in the first section, I think it would be fine to site it just once. I did a quick search on PubMed for research about testosterone and competition and I found some articles that might be of interest. There are some articles about the role of testosterone in females as well, which could help with creating a discussion of testosterone's effects in multiple distinct populations. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wikieditor1017 (talk • contribs) 22:50, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
Isis' response
[edit]Thank you for your edits, and thank you for your suggestions! I will look more into the Likert Scale and add a link to a wiki page if one exists. Also, I'll work on including more resources and fixing the citations that I have. Quick question: From your perspective, did the information seem neutral?