User talk:CATRHET130/sandbox
Rhea Quezon: "After the fall of the Berlin Wall, she was able to publish her first collection, Deutsches Roulette, meaning German Roulette, in 1991 by Suhrkamp Verlag." -this is a little confusing because if Suhrkamp Verlag was the author, why was it considered to be "her collection"?
"She has worked as an English and French translator from English and French." redundant sentence "She finished the Abitur," perhaps explain what the Abitur is briefly even though there is a link to its page.
Although the Career section is concise and "to the point," it could be expanded a little more because it does come off a little to brief for such a long career.
Altogether, the page is very well organized and detailed and seems to have credible sourcing. Cool beans!
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