User talk:Bulldogs2021/sandbox
Good background research so far. Keep it up into the first draftRJBazell (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 20:56, 6 November 2017 (UTC)
Hi Bulldogs2021,
I am your student peer reviewer, and it'd like to let you know that you are doing great work on this article. There is a nice use statistics and information. There was one instance where, in the lead, some less neutral language was used, but other than that, this is a great first draft!