User talk:Bskerr2/bear creek downs
You need to avoid making evaluative comments, such as saying that the establishment is "unique". It would be OK to quote a published statement that makes this claim, but for you to make it violates neutral point of view.
Add citations to sources for all facts.
When referring to events, use specific dates rather than saying "recently" or "in the past". Two years from now, recently will not mean the same thing.
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