User talk:Brynlangrock
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Peer Review
[edit]I just finished my peer review of your article. ````IsaacmM24 — Preceding unsigned comment added by IsaacM24 (talk • contribs) 21:48, 22 October 2020 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]Hi Bryn! I peer reviewed your article here: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Brynlangrock/User:Brynlangrock/1976–77_Syracuse_Orangemen_basketball_team/Lalevi_Peer_Review Lalevi (talk) 02:18, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
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[edit]Hello, Brynlangrock, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:57, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
Feedback on your draft
[edit]Greetings Brynlangrock!
I've taken a pass on User:Brynlangrock/1976–77 Syracuse Orangemen basketball team and had some feedback on the article.
For one, you've added a ton of great structured information in the form of those new tables. Great work on that! I know that tables on Wikipedia are not the easiest thing in the world to make so I appreciate the work that has gone into those.
I had a few pieces of feedback:
- You've only added one reference and it's a website that seems to serve basically the same information you've included. You should consider adding more information from more sources. Newspapers reports, etc, would all be valuable.
- You've added almost no text to the article. For each new section, can you write text to summarize things?
- Because there is no text your references are sort of hanging out in the text as a flowing [1]. I think if you add text, you can fix this.
- You have an empty section on Player awards.
Please do a pass on your article as soon as you can and then let me know. I'll give your article another pass before I give you the final go-ahead to make your article live. —mako๛ 18:49, 2 November 2020 (UTC)