User talk:Brucenc

AfC notification: Draft:George Walther Sr. has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:George Walther Sr.. Thanks! Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 08:56, 7 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Draft: george Walther Sr.

Roger/Dodger : Thanks for your suggestion. One of the granddaughters of George Walther Sr. who reviewed the initial draft also commented that she thought there was too much on the business, the Dayton Steel Foundry. She thought that much of the text about the business should be deleted to better focus on George Sr. I have deleted much of the business info so that the remaining paragraphs focus on the person George Walther Sr. As a new author I hope you see this reply Brucenc (talk) 04:38, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: George Walther Sr. (April 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Worldbruce was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms, that are designed to promote or show-off the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Worldbruce (talk) 01:45, 23 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Worldbruce (talk) 01:45, 23 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:George Walther Sr. has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:George Walther Sr.. Thanks! Worldbruce (talk) 04:43, 1 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: George Walther Sr. (July 5)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Mr. Guye was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms, that are designed to promote or show-off the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Mr. Guye (talk) 03:30, 5 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Brucenc, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Mr. Guye (talk) 03:30, 5 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: George Walther Sr. (July 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:

Long and daunting. Article doesn't stay on point. The article should be about the person and should evolve into essay length explanations of inventions. I'm declining because an article this intricate likely wouldn't survive AfD.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Sulfurboy (talk) 04:13, 23 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Brucenc, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Sulfurboy (talk) 04:13, 23 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: George Walther Sr. has been accepted

George Walther Sr., which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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Graeme Bartlett (talk) 05:41, 31 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]