User talk:Brswenson

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feedback on segregation analysis

Alpal2012 (talk) 02:46, 11 May 2012 (UTC)Alpal2012 Hi Brenton. This looks good. I especially like the categories that you divided your page into. I think you hit the relevant topics and structured your article well. I also like that you have a lot of links to other pages in the body of your article. The only think I might do is elaborate on the technique section? Like how do you fit the data and what are the possible parameters? It also might be helpful to have a few links to studies that used CSA? Just ideas...[reply]

Phg2012 (talk) 20:12, 13 May 2012 (UTC)Hi Brenton, Good work writing this up! I second Alie's idea that you should add a few examples. Maybe with the examples you could also address the technical aspects that are missing from this page. Another thing that I might consider doing is to add more hyperlinks to the other wikipedia pages within the text. It probably seems redundant, but I think it is nice for people to be able to click on the word throughout the text. Lastly, I think it would be good to list the software that people use for this sort of analysis.[reply]