User talk:Breannabooze/sandbox

SO-100: instructor comment

Just one comment. Please assign this article to yourself back on the Dashboard page under "students" -- thanks! Your instructor, Sarahczarita (talk) 23:36, 1 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Second set of comments based on your draft:

Your first 3 sources look good -- academic, peer-reviewed and relevant. But you should have 5 at least at this point -- were there 2 others you didn't post?
Your outline and plan for your research looks good to me. Make sure that as you are collecting info, you document which source each bit of info comes from. And obviously rewrite everything into your own words carefully.
The way I would suggest doing that is, as you read the sources you found, take notes in bullet-point form under each one so that once you turn that into your written article you can easily cite where each fact comes from.
Let me know if you have other questions about this feedback. Sarahczarita (talk) 00:19, 21 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I like the topic but do not see the 150 words. I would suggest digging to find the history of Sensory Art Therapy; where it came from, what other forms are there (music, dance, touch?), what forms of therapy are similar, who benefits from sensory art therapy and provide sources to back it up and then put it in your own words, citing your sources. BPB1984 (talk) 21:51, 4 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I like the topic but do not see the 150 word draft. I would suggest digging to find the history of Sensory Art Therapy; where it came from, what other forms are there (music, dance, touch?), what forms of therapy are similar, who benefits from sensory art therapy and provide sources to back it up and then put it in your own words, citing your sources. BPB1984 (talk) 21:53, 4 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]