User talk:Bmrulz11

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Speedy deletion nomination of TD Canada Trust (Green Machine)

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A tag has been placed on TD Canada Trust (Green Machine), requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Some advice

Ok, I'll try and be reasonably gentle here: the Green Machine article was nowhere close to an encyclopedia article, and literally had to be deleted ASAP. Let me try and give you a few pointers:

any time your only sources are from that company, it's WP:SPAM
any time you start listing features, it's WP:SPAM
any time you use WP:PEACOCK terms, it's WP:SPAM
any time you include the company name in the title, it's usually WP:SPAM

It is actually possible that an article on Green Machine could be viable, if:

you can prove that it was the very first set of ABM's in Canada
you can prove that the introduction of ABM's was an important step in Canadian banking
you can prove the above without ever linking to TD's website and use carefully selected reliable sources instead
you might need to make a more generic ABMs in Canada article instead, and discuss the evolution - with linkages to White Label ABMs in Canada - and feature TD's ABM system as part of an overall evolution instead of a separate Green Machine article

I'll be watching here for any reply should you need assistance with the rules and policies around here (✉→BWilkins←✎) 11:21, 17 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]