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Your submission at Articles for creation: Southwest PGA (August 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by I dream of horses were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Reads a bit like a pamphlet, particularly in the introduction, and is only referenced to the official website.

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I dream of horses If you reply here, please ping me by adding {{U|I dream of horses}} to your message (talk to me) (My edits) @ 03:44, 12 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Bmadrid19! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! I dream of horses If you reply here, please ping me by adding {{U|I dream of horses}} to your message (talk to me) (My edits) @ 03:44, 12 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@I dream of horses:Thanks for looking at the page I created for the Southwest PGA. I totally get your comments however it is an organization and I did look at a lot of wiki golf organizations and all are very similar in the way it reads. Check the biggest two in my mind https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/United_States_Golf_Association and https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Professional_Golfers%27_Association_of_America. Very similar. I'm happy to edit and resubmit but don't really know how to change the copy to better represent what it is than the opening graf which is exactly what they do and the other golf orgs. Look at https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Illinois_PGA as well as other PGA Sections. All very similar. I can add ref's to their tournament page to show the events they run, etc.? Will that help? Thanks again for looking at it. Appreciate it!!! @I dream of horses:Thanks again for your comments, which helped. I edited and added ref's. It does read better and the same as the other golf org's. Thanks again I dream of horses. Let me know.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Southwest PGA (August 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MJL was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Read previous reviewer's comments.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Southwest PGA and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Southwest PGA, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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–MJL ‐Talk‐^☖ 18:48, 12 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@MJL:Thanks for looking at the edit. I did take the first reviewers comments and edited the copy so it didn't read "a bit like an advertisement", which I provided examples of other golf organizations in my message above to the first reviewer. Regarding the Reliable sources, they are straight from the PGA of America, which I think everyone would site as reliable. Can you let me know your suggestions for what you saw as needing a reliable source. Appreciate your assistance MJL!— Preceding unsigned comment added by Bmadrid19 (talk • contribs) 00:43, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Southwest PGA has been accepted

Southwest PGA, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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–MJL ‐Talk‐^☖ 17:59, 25 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry it took so long for me to review this. Life kind of got in the way.. woops. Congratulations, though! –MJL ‐Talk‐^☖ 18:01, 25 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]