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Your submission at Articles for creation: Southwest PGA (August 12)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by I dream of horses were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
 I dream of horses  If you reply here, please ping me by adding {{U|I dream of horses}} to your message  (talk to me) (My edits) @ 03:44, 12 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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@I dream of horses:Thanks for looking at the page I created for the Southwest PGA. I totally get your comments however it is an organization and I did look at a lot of wiki golf organizations and all are very similar in the way it reads. Check the biggest two in my mind https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/United_States_Golf_Association and https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Professional_Golfers%27_Association_of_America. Very similar. I'm happy to edit and resubmit but don't really know how to change the copy to better represent what it is than the opening graf which is exactly what they do and the other golf orgs. Look at https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Illinois_PGA as well as other PGA Sections. All very similar. I can add ref's to their tournament page to show the events they run, etc.? Will that help? Thanks again for looking at it. Appreciate it!!! @I dream of horses:Thanks again for your comments, which helped. I edited and added ref's. It does read better and the same as the other golf org's. Thanks again I dream of horses. Let me know.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Southwest PGA (August 12)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MJL was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
MJLTalk 18:48, 12 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@MJL:Thanks for looking at the edit. I did take the first reviewers comments and edited the copy so it didn't read "a bit like an advertisement", which I provided examples of other golf organizations in my message above to the first reviewer. Regarding the Reliable sources, they are straight from the PGA of America, which I think everyone would site as reliable. Can you let me know your suggestions for what you saw as needing a reliable source. Appreciate your assistance MJL!— Preceding unsigned comment added by Bmadrid19 (talkcontribs) 00:43, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Southwest PGA has been accepted

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Southwest PGA, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.

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MJLTalk 17:59, 25 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry it took so long for me to review this. Life kind of got in the way.. woops. Congratulations, though! –MJLTalk 18:01, 25 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]