User talk:Blunthought/sandbox
Welcome
[edit]We could use any feedback, both comments and questions. Please put all edits and comments underneath their respective headers below.
Thank you again for your time! --Blunthought (talk) 23:34, 9 March 2014 (UTC)
General Feedback
[edit]Could use a figure(?) but not quite sure what that figure would be.
We agree. In the instructions it requires an original figure/table/or picture. Not sure whether the picture you posted meets that criteria? ( We're in the same boat too). Perhaps it might be advantageous to list some of the applications of restorative justice earlier in the article just to introduce the topic. Then of course, it can be described in later detail as you have done. Really, not a major issue because we do appreciate the logic of your current layout as well.
You all did a great jobs with linking relevant materials. You've utilized a variety of references, certainly exceedingly the minimum requirement (6).
Content wise there's not much to critique (except the issue of flow which we mention in the subsequent section). It was clear, informative, and I definitely learned a lot from reading your article.
Great job.
Introduction
[edit]Hey, introductory paragraph looks great. Nice background to open up the subject matter. The picture was a great touch. Our only comment is that we were wondering where your statement in the latter part of the paragraph originated? (this was sentence defining restorative justice within the framework of social work). There was no reference. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dklauber84 (talk • contribs) 21:48, 18 March 2014 (UTC)