User talk:Blueskynoise/sandbox

Hi Ambika Good start, I changed a few words for neutrality's sake, and others for clarity. I think it's ok to keep using the company names and parties involved just for clarity. Can you check that I didn't change any of your meanings? I realize there is some repetition, maybe we need to get everything on the google doc so we can read it for flow and repetition etc.I will upload the photo tomorrow, there might be more than one we can use. cheers!Sliver9754 (talk) 04:42, 31 March 2012 (UTC)