User talk:Beckycraig10

AITO

The question is not whether this article should be featured in wiki or not, but the state of the article. The Great Rail Journeys is written in a neutral form, but tha AITO article contains several non-neutral statements (Consumers booking with AITO operators are assured of financial security, high quality holidays and excellent personal service) that's why I deleted it. If you would like to work on the article to improve it, I can restore it for your anytime. Thank you for your appreciation! NCurse _work 19:50, 14 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Look, in my opinion the problem could be the style: if an article contains a sentence like that ("high quality holidays and excellent personal service") then I'd say it doesn't represent neutrality so it must be deleted. I took a look at the ABTA article and it's totally neutral. You should try to write a short description of the artice in neutral style (WP:NPOV). I hope it helps. NCurse _work 20:05, 28 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]