User talk:Bazante.m
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[edit]Hello, Bazante.m, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:05, 19 January 2017 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]What does the article (or section) do well?
- Great topic!
- I love the links at the end of the article for more exploration among similar topics.
- You cover a lot of elements well: sustainable diet definition, food security, plant vs animal diets.
What changes would you suggest overall?
- Adding a bulleted list to the diets denominated as sustainable might make the reading more clear.
What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution?
- Some of the links are placed in the middle of a sentence. They should be placed at the end of all relevant sentences.