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16:03, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kaiam Corp. (November 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by HighKing was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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HighKing⁺⁺ 18:48, 13 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kaiam Corp. (November 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Vincent60030 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Kaiam Corp. and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Kaiam Corp., click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
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VKZY^LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 01:57, 23 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

New article on the company

Bardiapezeshki, I have redirected your draft to Kaiam, which I created independently after the company became notable via press coverage of the layoffs at the Livingston facility. The article could use some expansion of the information on its products, with as many informational wiki-links as possible; it would be particularly useful if you can provide additional references to third-party reports on these, and on the company's early history, but press releases are frowned on. If there are URLs for now deleted third-party reports, the Wayback machine will often have them archived.

Your user name suggests you may be Dr. Bardia Pezeshki. If so, I need to make you aware of Wikipedia's Conflict of Interest policy, and strongly recommend that you make suggestions for edits at Talk:Kaiam (still a red link right now but your account is autoconfirmed so you can create it if no one else has) rather than editing the article directly. Yngvadottir (talk) 21:17, 26 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]