User talk:Barbramartin622/National Theatre of the Deaf
The Lead includes a solid introductory sentence that describes NTD clearly. It allows the reader to get a thorough overview of the topic.
The content added is relevant to the topic as it covers the founding, touring productions, notable actors, and the overall mission of the company. As this article concerns the disabled community, it addresses Wikipedia's equity gap. However, there isn't much information highlighting Deaf People of Color in the article.
One thing that could be expanded on is "Furthermore, NTD has recently appeared on both Disney Plus, Sesame Street, and The White House." - maybe add what shows these were/how NTD was represented on these shows?
There are some minor typos throughout, but overall the content is neutral and is a very interesting insight into NTD and its history. Great job!! I learned a lot.
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