User talk:Balthasar104/sandbox
Create topic titles instead of just creating one big paragraph. Include more sources, and links. Not biased, descriptive. Other than that it was good. TBarsha (talk) 18:41, 5 April 2012 (UTC)
Create topic titles instead of just creating one big paragraph. Include more sources, and links. Not biased, descriptive. Other than that it was good. TBarsha (talk) 18:41, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]