User talk:Babatunde Fafunwa/Canopy seed bank

Peer Review

- Fix your references so that you don't have doubles of everything

- Do you have any images that you can use for each of your sections?

- Your article body is just a little long, it might be useful to use sub-headings

- Can anything in your article be used as a blue link to another Wikipedia article?

- Last two sections have no references linked...

- SarahEnviro (talk) 15:33, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the thoughtful comments and suggestions Sarah. I will work towards them. Babatunde Fafunwa (talk) 23:49, 13 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

REVIEW

Add blue links

some of the references are repeating. Reuse the reference.

in the methods of seed detection, remove the authors name. Instead cite them. KAPARN1609 (talk) 16:05, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Noted Parneet, the article is still a work in progress and your suggestions are very helpful. Thank you. Babatunde Fafunwa (talk) 23:50, 13 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

HENV 680 - Peer review

- I dont think you need a whole section for definition if it will be just one sentence.

- In the article body, "after disturbances such as fire have occurred" and "severe disturbances such as wildfires" I would suggest adding commas, i.e.: "severe disturbances, such as wildfires" to ensure the sentence is clear.

-In the the significance of canopy seed banks section, maybe provide further explanation of how the canopy seed banks are critical in the ecosystems or provide an example. Instead of just listing the reasons.

Great article draft overall!! Kyra.Pompeo (talk) 16:18, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for spotting the typo Kyra, I must have missed it, and I'll try to look up more literature on the topic to improve it, hopefully i find something good. Anyways, Thank you! Babatunde Fafunwa (talk) 23:53, 13 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]