User talk:Ayee667
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[edit]Hello, Ayee667, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:12, 6 September 2019 (UTC)
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[edit]Hello,
I have a few suggestions for your article on Fanta Regina Nacro. First, I would expand on and/or clarify the opening sentence as it appears a bit broad as well as vague. I also would think about opening with biographical information instead of jumping straight into her career in the introductory sentence. Second, I recommend thoroughly edits to ensure proper grammar structure is being used. Make sure the period is before the reference footnote. Also, refer to the filmmaker by the same title throughout the article and make sure her name is spelled correctly which includes accents. I have made a few corrections as part of the direct edit portion of the peer review.
Whenever you are mentioning an argument about your filmmaker from one of your academic sources, make sure to clarify who is making this argument in the Wikipedia article so that you do not appear biased. I would also be careful about the sources you use, it is important to make sure they are Wikipedia reliable. There is a lot of good information in the Career section. You are off to a good start, but this article needs some expanding on. For example, the Awards section contains a blanket statement but no specification.
--Thestrongestonehere (talk) 23:14, 2 November 2019 (UTC) Thestrongestonehere