User talk:AyanoTanaka/Hakata Dontaku
Here is where I wrote my peer review. https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:AyanoTanaka/Hakata_Dontaku/Kensu.bates_Peer_Review#Lead_evaluation Kensu.bates (talk) 20:05, 31 January 2020 (UTC)
Feedback on your article
[edit]@AyanoTanaka: Wow! You've massively expanded the article and really added a bunch of wonderful content. I've done a quick pass and I think it looks pretty good.
The English language has a number of issues. If you can spend some time polishing it and/or ask somebody else to help, that would be good.
Other than that, you should take a look at this list of suggestions for polishing your article which is a helpful set of ideas from altsalt. Many won't apply but some might. I've gone through and made a few edits to your articles to clean things up—mostly tiny stylistic and English things but there are definitely more like that. Look at the history to see what I've done before you move it over.
Do a final pass and try to address any of the things on the list on our website that you think are useful and would improve things. Then go ahead and make it live. Thanks for your work on this! —mako๛ 02:52, 14 February 2020 (UTC)