User talk:Areider1827/sandbox
TA Comments:
In-text citations: yes
Professional tone: yes
Paraphrasing real science: yes, though this contribution is slightly short. Look for opportunities to expand
Grammar and spelling: yes
Links to other wiki articles: yes
Score: 20/20
Peer Review:
This sandbox overall looks great. Perhaps explain why β-carotene can be treated as a particle in a box at energy level 11. As well as to link one-dimensional particle in a box. 1. Convert 8303AU in terms of nanometers to describe wavelength (1au=0.0529177249nm) 2. Can rewrite the following sentence (This wavelength corresponds to red emitted light in atomic units, which explains the coloration of β-carotene) as: This number describes the wavelength of light required to induce a transition from beta-carotene's ground state to its first excited state. This wavelength value falls near the infrared region which explains β-carotene's red color.
RO, SOOIHK Peer Review Score: 20/20
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