User talk:Aoba47/Archive 19

A barnstar for you!

	The Real Life Barnstar
	Maybe it's a bit late, but I'm awarding you this barnstar for joining discussions related on off-Wikipedia topics (such as Alexandra Stan's Mami and Romania's 2018 Eurovision bid.) Just wanted to thank you for your time and opinion! Best regards; Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:00, 3 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the conversation. It was really interesting! Aoba47 (talk) 20:02, 3 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Abby (TV series)

The article Abby (TV series) you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Abby (TV series) for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Courcelles -- Courcelles (talk) 21:21, 3 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

A favor

I recently nominated the article Tsubasa Oozora to GA (after the copyedit of course). If you don't wanna make a review it's okay. If not, could you give Kazuya Mishima a look. I recently expanded the article but I don't know if the reception section is in good shape. Good luck with your work. Take care.Tintor2 (talk) 22:44, 3 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the message. I have picked up Tsubasa Oozora for a review. It will take me a while to put up all the comments as it is a rather long article. If you could provide any help on my current FAC? Either way, have a great rest of your weekend! Aoba47 (talk) 22:53, 3 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Aoba47. If you're not too busy, maybe you can also try giving a review of Aya Hirano? If you can't do it, it's okay; maybe @Tintor2: might be interested as well. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 12:17, 4 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the message, but I will not have time right now to do the review. The [Tsubasa Oozora]] will take me some time as it is a rather long article, and I want to make sure that I provide a thorough review for it. If the article is still up for GAN in the future, I will definitely consider taking it. I hope that you are having a wonderful start to your week! Aoba47 (talk) 18:24, 4 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hey

Hi, Aoba47, I tend to edit Wikipedia as a hobby, bu I just came across an article about the 'I Need You' song by Paris Hilton as I was googling her, and while I read her article, I realized there wasn't much actualization on the page from 2012-13 onward. She has done a residence for the past five years in Ibiza and that is not mentioned either in the career's section. Also, in the last paragraph of the lead, it is first stated that her fragrances have made US$1.5 billion, and just later on, it says US$2.5 billion (which is the more recent report I read). The lead mentions too much info, especially the paragraph about her debut album... I saw you created the song's page and put on that info on the PH page, so I was wondering if you could do the updating with as much help from me as you'd want.190.249.179.87 (talk) 17:29, 7 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Sources:

http://time.com/4964680/dj-paris-hilton-ibiza/ https://www.elle.com/beauty/news/a27388/paris-hilton-fragrance-launch/ https://www.wmagazine.com/story/paris-hilton-interview https://galoremag.com/paris-hilton-original-reality-tv-business-queen/

Thank you very much for taking the time to read. Greets.

Thank you for the message, and good luck with your edits. Unfortunately, I am not interested enough in Paris Hilton to really do any major work on her article. I just thought the single was cool and wanted to make an article on it. Aoba47 (talk) 17:47, 7 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Down

Hey Aoba, how you doing? I'm leaving a message on your talk page because I'm finally back to Wikipedia (claps and cheers on the background) and able to push my projects to my arms again. I've been inactive during two months because I was very, very busy working and I additionally decided to take a break and not use internet for some time, it was hard for me (I must confess) I just abandoned all my GAN but on the other hand I reflected about so many things and spent my time reading and going outside to ride and walk etc... I did some minimal things that I actually forgot how good and positive were for me because I was so focused on this virtual world. But I'm here now and I'm asking for a favor, are you still "down" to review Fifth Harmony's "Down" again? I've made some edits and I would appreciate your avaliation. What do u think? -UrbanJE (talk) 22:32, 8 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the comment, and I hope that you had a great break. I think that it is important to have a balance, and not spend too much time on Wikipedia. I think that the "Down" article is in great shape. My only concern is the music video GIF. As I noted in the previous GAN, I do not believe that the caption really justifies its inclusion. I would swap out that particular caption and source with something specifically about the motel setting (which is shown in the GIF). Both Fuse writer Bianca Gracie and Gil Kaufman of Billboard make comments about the setting, and would make for better image captions to justify the inclusion of the GIF. I unfortunately do not have time to do an adequate review. I am trying to get a lot of progress in my current job search and career planning. I apologize for not being much help, but I hope you have a wonderful weekend! Aoba47 (talk) 01:38, 9 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of The Way That I Love You

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article The Way That I Love You you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of MarioSoulTruthFan -- MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:40, 9 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"Rock Is Dead (Marilyn Manson song)"

Hi Aoba47! Thanks for the barnstar you gave me for editing that Paris Hilton article. I know that you love music and I was wondering if you would be interested in reviewing the article for "Rock Is Dead (Marilyn Manson song)", which I nominated for GA. Thanks for your work on this site!--MagicatthemovieS

Thank you for the message. Unfortunately, I am taking a break from reviewing, but good luck with yhe article and the nomination. Aoba47 (talk) 04:51, 10 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of The One (Tamar Braxton song)

The article The One (Tamar Braxton song) you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:The One (Tamar Braxton song) for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Freikorp -- Freikorp (talk) 01:03, 11 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of The Way That I Love You

The article The Way That I Love You you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:The Way That I Love You for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of MarioSoulTruthFan -- MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 02:21, 11 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Say Less (Ashanti song)

The article Say Less (Ashanti song) you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Say Less (Ashanti song) for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Freikorp -- Freikorp (talk) 11:01, 11 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of I Need You (Paris Hilton song)

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article I Need You (Paris Hilton song) you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of IndianBio -- IndianBio (talk) 11:01, 11 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of The Way That I Love You

The article The Way That I Love You you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:The Way That I Love You for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of MarioSoulTruthFan -- MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:21, 12 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of I Need You (Paris Hilton song)

The article I Need You (Paris Hilton song) you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:I Need You (Paris Hilton song) for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of IndianBio -- IndianBio (talk) 09:01, 13 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Simone Russell scheduled for TFA

This is to let you know that the Simone Russell article has been scheduled as today's featured article for July 5, 2018. Please check the article needs no amendments. If you're interested in editing the main page text, you're welcome to do so at Wikipedia:Today's featured article/July 5, 2018, but note that a coordinator will trim the lead to around 1100 characters anyway, so you aren't obliged to do so. Thanks! Jimfbleak - talk to me? 14:17, 13 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 17:00, 14 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Abby (TV series)

Hello:

The copy edit that you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article Abby (TV series) has been completed.

Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

Good luck with the FAC process.

Regards,

Twofingered Typist (talk) 15:18, 13 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the help! Aoba47 (talk) 19:16, 13 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of I Need You (Paris Hilton song)

The article I Need You (Paris Hilton song) you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:I Need You (Paris Hilton song) for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of IndianBio -- IndianBio (talk) 13:21, 14 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Reverted Edits to Lady_Blue_(TV_series)

Hullo, User:Aoba47! I noticed that one of your edits was flagged as possible vandalism and added the name of a seemingly unrelated company to several references. I reverted the edit, but if they were meant in good faith, feel free to re-add them with an edit summary explaining the source. Happy editing! —zfJames Please add {{ping|ZfJames}} to your reply (talk page, contribs) 22:37, 14 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

What are you talking about? My edits were removing the publisher from reference parameters, as I was advised in the FAC. I have no idea what you are talking about, especially since you are the one adding back information that I removed. Aoba47 (talk) 22:41, 14 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Sharissa

The article Sharissa you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Sharissa for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Freikorp -- Freikorp (talk) 02:20, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Love 'Em All

The article Love 'Em All you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Love 'Em All for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Freikorp -- Freikorp (talk) 01:41, 20 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Drake Would Love Me

The article Drake Would Love Me you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Drake Would Love Me for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Freikorp -- Freikorp (talk) 02:01, 20 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of File:BurningZonePromotionalImage.jpg

A tag has been placed on File:BurningZonePromotionalImage.jpg requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section F1 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the image is an unused duplicate or lower-quality copy of another file on Wikipedia having the same file format, and all inward links have been updated.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. Stefan2 (talk) 16:30, 20 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Sources

Moved from user talk:czar

Hello again! I hope that you are having a wonderful weekend so far. I am thinking about putting the The Little Mermaid II: Pinball Frenzy through the FAC process sometime in the future. I was wondering if you could look through it to see if it would be ready for that (specifically to see if the sources are appropriate for FAC). Aoba47 (talk) 22:59, 22 June 2018 (UTC)

Hiya! (Did we discuss this article before? I vaguely recall but don't remember where.) Your hunch is right that the sources won't work for FAC—they don't work great for GA either. I'd ask yourself re: each source that isn't already noted at WP:VG/RS: What about this source shows reliability, either through explicit editorial process, editorial pedigree, reputation for accuracy or fact-checking, etc.? Spong.com appears to be the worst offender, off-hand. fr:GameKult is under discussion at WT:VG/RS and I've brought up Gamereactor before. LifeZette doesn't make a very compelling case for including its opinion as noteworthy. It's nice that Nintendo Blast uses cc-by-sa-3.0 licensing but their staff page doesn't necessarily inspire confidence (what is their editorial process?) I'd develop your own thoughts on (or defense for) these sources before approaching FAC.

On the nom in general, the article's on the pallid side but probably just because there isn't much to work with. I'd reread it as if you were a general audience. Do you need to know that it's the 28th animated feature? Can any sentence be made simpler? Remove superfluous words or syllables wherever feasible. Remove passive voice ("The game was described as") when it clarifies the sentence. There's lots of advice at WP:VG/GL on prose, especially Reception re: not attributing every sentence to its publication or author unless the sentence is an opinion that needs qualification. You can drop the |publisher= fields on your refs too (more in the VG guidelines). Feel free to {{ping}} me if you have any questions or I can help (not watching, please {{ping}}) czar 16:20, 23 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]