User talk:Ant96848
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[edit]Hello, Ant96848, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:28, 10 February 2016 (UTC)
Barnet & Reef Associates
[edit]Hi, Ant96848. I took a look at your new article. I made some major changes to it, principally removing the detailed biography of the founders as well as toning down some of the praise of the company in the voice of the encyclopedia. But I think you've got a solid first article there. I'd recommend adding a bit more about the founders back in (provided you can do so with some sources which are reliable), but in the context of the founding or the history of the company. For instance, you had a few sentences about their experience before founding the firm in the firm's history section. That's good, because it gives the reader context for how and why they formed the agency, which is the thing they're searching for if they're on this page.
I'd also like you to substantiate the claims in the article about PR International. I don't know what that is (do they have a wikipedia article?) and how important it was/is to people who are independent from the subject. The current source used is an interview w/ the PRSA w/ one of the founders. He may know what happened, but a critical reader will want different sources which show that it was a big accomplishment and that they're well known for it.
Let me know if you have any questions. I hope this helps. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:01, 19 April 2016 (UTC)