User talk:Ambikakhurana

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Hi. Here is my advice for the article so far. Overall, this seems like a good start. Towards the beginning of the article, adding a definition of "gyrus" may be useful to the reader to give them more context for what the article is about. Also, the information on the timeline of the development is very clear and well-written. However, additional information on the mechanism of development would be useful. It may also be good to include more information on the function of the occipital gyri. Hjetter (talk) 15:29, 23 October 2019 (UTC)