User talk:Amandas009/sandbox

Hi Amanda -- this is your teacher checking in. I noticed you picked a topic that someone else is also writing about for their class. You might want to go make a comment on their talk page and let them know. Their user page is here. Sarahczarita (talk) 19:34, 27 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

SO100: Instructor Comments

This is a really great start on your article. A couple comments:

You should look up formatting guidelines to make sure you are formatting your reference list correctly based on wikipedia guidelines.
Overall your list of sources looks really solid. I think one is most potentially biased -- from the association for holistic nursing -- so you might want to start with the book at the top as your first source.
I guess I would recommend maybe finding a couple extra references just to make sure the content isn't biased because a few of the links are from that one AHNA group. But other than that, I think this is a good start and good direction.
Finally, there are some grammar/editing issues that I would recommend looking at, maybe reword things for clarity. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sarahczarita (talk • contribs) 00:38, 21 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

SO100: Peer Review

Article article looks good as of now. both paragraphs were solid and easy to understand. The only thing that I would recommend is that you could expand the first paragraph more to give the reader a good overview of what is holistic nursing all about before starting talking about the history of it and other subtopics that you add in the future. otherwise it's good and keep up with the good work.Abbadisaleh (talk) 17:05, 31 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]