User talk:Alibagbey/charlesbusch
Hey, team--I have inserted some detailed notes in italics on your sandbox page. Please be aware of them and address the issues. They aren't too onerous--mostly cleaning up references and expanding some generalized assertions. Otherwise, you have done a nice job. Congratulations! --Drdvader21 (talk) 15:50, 2 November 2011 (UTC)
- Wikipedia articles should be written in narrative prose paragraphs, using bullet-point lists sparingly. As Rburdette says below, you need to convert these lists into narrative paragraphs that explain this person's life and career. Please see WP:EMBED for more details. -- Ssilvers (talk) 19:59, 21 November 2011 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi Ali, Courtney and Douglas: Lots of great information to get your article started. Good formatting of your sections. You'll want to start working on turning your bullets into paragraphs now and properly formatting your references as you do so. Enjoy! --Rburdette (talk) 17:54, 25 October 2011 (UTC)
Current article -- Ssilvers (talk) 04:27, 12 October 2011 (UTC)