User talk:Alexisbgoodson
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[edit]Hello, Alexisbgoodson, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:46, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
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[edit]I feel like you've added a lot of details to the article that help to make it more informative to the reader. I think the introduction section could be made stronger by adding more details and making a complete summary of the article. I would recommend restructuring the sentence about Paola's art to make it more clear. The information added under personal life is very good and contributes to the article as a whole by making the reader more familiar with Levi-Montalcini and her upbringing. The article is very well written but there are many sections where additional sources and details could be added to make it even better!