User talk:Alanna.davis/sandbox

-For the Little Mix page i suggest fixing a few minor grammatical errors -Also adding some additional facts about the girls' life history (or to do so in another article) -The article states each girls' influence in music, but don't explain why; either look through given sources or find new sources for this section

Little Mix

1) Find citations for unsourced information- In the Little Mix article, there is no citation for the ancestry for one of the group's members (Leigh-Anne). There are multiple articles claiming her ancestry, but I am unsure if these articles are trustworthy. Alanna.davis (talk) 17:11, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

There are articles that claim her mother is English and her father is Afro-Jamaican and Afro-Barbadian Wikipedia states she is Jamaican and Barbadian, but no source has validated these claims.Alanna.davis (talk) 17:11, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

For each individual members' bio I would like to expand on Jade and Leigh-Anne's sections because both of theirs is very vague. Jade and Perrie both grew up in the same geographic region, but the article does not mention Jade's prior education or family unlike Perrie Alanna.davis (talk) 17:11, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

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Jade states that Pinnock is of Jamaican and Bajan ancestry She [Leigh-Anne] is the daughter of John Pinnock and Debra Thornhill ADDED http://gulfnews.com/life-style/celebrity/little-mix-want-to-make-their-mark-1.1259838 ---> This citation used for another member's (Jade) ethnic background also validates another. Will this be acceptable even if it wasn't from Leigh-Anne herself? Alanna.davis (talk) 17:11, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

Jade attended South Tyneside College where she took courses such as pop vocals and cosmetic make up. (fact already in article) Jade is the daughter of Norma Badwi and James Thirlwall and has an older brother named Karl. ADDED

Perrie is from the Whiteleas neighborhood of South Shields. ADDEDAlanna.davis (talk) 17:11, 25 April 2017 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Alanna.davis (talk • contribs) 17:14, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

For the products and endorsements section: In December 2016, Little Mix launched their second perfume "Wishmaker". ADDED Alanna.davis (talk) 17:11, 25 April 2017 (UTC)